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No Talent's
written by Lovely_Suicide10:54 AM 11/12/04Useless at these poems
That speak of nothing but death
Useless rhymes
No Talents here.
Worthless at these drawings
That are ugly as can be
Useless marks
No Talents here.
Look beneath the surface
Nope no love there
Nope i don't seem to even care
No talents here.
Nothing to come home too
Facing a door each day
don't seem to be free
No talent's here.
Give up and don't even try
Might as well give up
No more trying to be better
I have No talent's. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i'm useless at everything i see ppl with really good poems i keep trying but they just get stupider and my pictures suck i suck ppl r lucky who can write poems or draw pictures im not lucky
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| » Comments / Feedback | by lifescolddeath (11-12-2004 - 11:07 AM)
by dacode05 (11-12-2004 - 11:29 AM)
| i can draw cool stickmen! but even my son laughs at them...
so sad, but enjoyed reading ur poem this morning. please keep writing. |
by Genocide Reaper (11-12-2004 - 03:57 PM)
| Yeah you suck! I'm fucking with you... You don't come close to sucking. Trying is all we have. So keep trying. |
by Trapezium (11-20-2004 - 05:58 PM)
| Ok dude, keep trying. The arts are one of the only legal ways of expressing yoursefl. Graffite is illegal, violence is illegal. Fuck, everything's illegal somehow. You've got talent, you just need to build on it. Many of us who have really good poems have either been writing for a long time or just have a very strong talent. |
by (anonymous) (11-29-2004 - 05:29 PM)
| you dont know me,i dont know you, lets keep it that way..... anyway i love your poems infact they are the only reason i live anymore. let me explain....... my ex boyfriend used to beat me and he called yesterday to apologize, i got mad at him and hung up the phone, he left a suicide note that was identical to one of your poems......... i read all your poems now, they are very good, i hope i can use one of your poems to explain why i kill myself tonight, the same one he used............. |
by (anonymous) (12-3-2004 - 06:20 PM)
| ur poems r good. i'd b a hypocrite if i said anymore. |
by Morbid Angel (12-3-2004 - 07:50 PM)
| I think she gave up writing... |
by wildblackmagic (12-3-2004 - 08:51 PM)
| dude whats up with that annonymus girl who left a comment...? anyway dont give up writing its all we got we have to stay together...... |
by sarah10087 (12-6-2004 - 11:44 AM)
by HuRtZlIkEaBtCh13 (12-6-2004 - 07:35 PM)
| I just think that u should put more poems in u r a rele rele good writer and i think u should write more often
KELSEY |
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