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whisper
written by bloodlyvalentine01:49 PM 11/7/04whisper
on the wind,
a melody
for me...
from you
my dark lord
you want me there
with you
whisper...
on the wind,
sweet words
of death...
come to me
he says
come...
to fill your place |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Schizophrenic_broken (11-7-2004 - 01:53 PM)
| yes, i think i shud stop commenting on your poems cuz theyre all gud and it's soo predictible wot I'm going to say.
It's good. lol |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-7-2004 - 05:25 PM)
| hehehehe, ur just about the only one who comments on them! |
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