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» Poem: why i did wat i did
why i did wat i did
written by Lovely_Suicide
07:25 AM 10/16/04
I didn't mean to do it
I couldn't make myself quit
I did it cause everyone kept telling me to die
That everything i said was all a lie...
I wanted to bring myself down
Let myself drown
Theres so much hate now
I guess thats another broken vow
I did it cause i wanted to prove i was right
I don't feel happy and bright
I feel depressed
I guess it's all i have supressed
Screwed up my life
Just give me the damn knife
Nothing left
Look at what i've theft
I keep screwing up
Just give the damn death cup!
I did what i did
Because i'm just a little kid!
Who dosn't know a thing about wanting to die
I guess i never have a reason to cry
I guess i have no reason to be here
Cause what i did i guess it was severe.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
*Crys*
Im sorry i dont care if i get banned now its wat i deserve

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» Comments / Feedback
by psycho_bunny (10-16-2004 - 08:06 AM)
You wont get banned... and I really liked your poem by the way, the emotion was superb.

by Mars_Phoenix (10-16-2004 - 12:47 PM)
that was a gooood poem

by NiteStalker (10-17-2004 - 12:10 AM)
wow... better than the suicide poems i use to write...

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