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» Poem: Mistake I Made
Mistake I Made
written by psycho_bunny
05:16 AM 8/11/04
I love you more then you know,
even if I hurt you so,
I hope with all my heart,
that we can go back to the start,
before I made that awful mistake,
that broke your heart...

I'm sorry I damaged your day,
and made you feel gray,
I didn't mean to break our trust,
to let it fall away and rust,
to make you feel better is a must.

I know I'm holding on like a leach,
even though I know your out of reach,
but if I dont try,
I will just curl up and die,
I'm sorry that I lied,
I really didn't try,
but I dont want to say goodbye,
your the only reason why,
I even stay alive.

So now I'm clenching on to you,
trying to forget what I did to you,
I hope someday you can forget to,
I really hate to make you blue,
if it was in my power,
to turn back the hour,
to make this all go away,
I would do it in the blink of an eye,
so then I wouldn't have to wonder why,
I made you cry.

But these tears are here to stay,
thinking about what I did that dreadful day,
I cant make it go away,
but this is what I'll say...
I love you more then life it self,
and even if you cant forgive me,
you will always be in my heart,
like you were from the start.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
If this poem would help in any possible way for what I have done I would post it all over town in huge letters...
but sadly its just my feelings on paper and I hope it will soften the stony damge I have done to the only person who ever loved truly loved me.

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» Comments / Feedback
by SuperBob (8-11-2004 - 05:24 AM)
wow..thats powerful...its impecable...i thought it was really sweet and nice...it got your point across really well...i do hope it accomplishes what you desire it to...

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