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» Poem: What Daddy Doesn't Know
What Daddy Doesn't Know
written by twistedmind33
01:05 AM 3/29/05
Daddy doesn’t know
How much I’ve changed

Daddy doesn’t know
Who I really am

Daddy doesn’t know
I owe it all to Mommy

Daddy doesn’t know
How lonely I am

Daddy doesn’t know
How much I miss him

Daddy doesn’t know
How much I wonder

Daddy doesn’t know
What could have been

Daddy doesn’t know
How selfish I think he is

Daddy doesn’t know
How I feel I could never forgive him

Daddy doesn’t know
How guilty I feel

Daddy doesn’t know
How much I want to hear his voice

Daddy doesn’t know
How much I want to feel his hug

Daddy doesn’t know
How much I want to die

Daddy doesn’t know
I just want to be where he is


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» Comments / Feedback
by BlissRavyn (3-29-2005 - 01:11 AM)
i can totally relate to that like a lot really good poem

by Dmcglamry (3-29-2005 - 01:37 AM)
this is an awesome poem i can really relate to this poem rock on

by one_youll_never_notice (3-29-2005 - 02:54 AM)
Oh my god I read this and started to cry. I love this poem. To me it is more than a poem. It is the story of my life. I love it . It is the best thing I have ever read.

by one_youll_never_notice (3-29-2005 - 02:54 AM)
Oh my god I read this and started to cry. I love this poem. To me it is more than a poem. It is the story of my life. I love it . It is the best thing I have ever read.

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