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Soldier(REALLY GOOD C FOR SELF!)
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
10:06 AM 3/20/05
Even though it rains and even though it storms.
I stand tough and in perfect form.
Raising my head and keeping it high.
Hanging in when there's cloudy skies.
I march on through out this battle.
I do something wrong and all you snitches tattle.
Im like the energizer bunny.
I keep going isn't that funny.
I been through so much pain and so much loss.
But I keep on going no matter what the cost.
I do it cause I have to not because I want to.
If I gave in what would my family and friends do?
I am the one who holds certaint people together.
Through out the rain and stormiest weather.
Im gonna keep tryin to make it all better. I cant give up I aint about to not ever.
I dont need a hand to hold or to cry on a shoulder.
I'll keep on fighting even when the battle's over.
To let something go you stoop down even lower.
I wont give up I'm the world's strongest soldier.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Ya cant get rid of this soldier. im the real thing not no god damn toy soldier.

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by doobz (3-20-2005 - 04:00 PM)
brilliant xx

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