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» Poem: Pretending, and wanting..
Pretending, and wanting..
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
08:20 PM 3/13/05
I hold on to my pillow tight
pretending it's you.
I lay close to it all night,
ignoring the truth.

I remember your scent,
from when you held me close.
The things you said how much they ment,
But I remember the way you kissed me the most.

For some odd reason I let you go,
you had no idea why,
because I didn't even know.

But now if you'll have me,
I want to be back with you.
Cause no one can make me more happy,
I hope you still feel that way too.


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TiM
no one ever fukin comments!!!!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by AmY_LeE_FaN (3-13-2005 - 09:01 PM)
cool..good job

by Anubite (3-13-2005 - 10:20 PM)
Hey i resent that i make comments, well not many but still i do comment, and bye the way great poem

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