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My Final Words To Sarah
written by Morbid Angel08:09 PM 12/12/04| You must have a hunger for words thrown at you, but I won't be the one to satisfy your urge. Fuck structure, fuck verses, fuck everything you think you know, it's not about how it looks it's all about the flow. It's because we've got it and it's what you lack the most, I bet you've never felt that buzz fly through you, from your fingers to your toes. Have you ever wondered why your poems aren't all that good? Have you ever wondered why everyone thinks you suck? It's because it's all true, I see nothing when I think of you. It's not worth my effort so I'll end my poetic part in this war, my pride isn't worth fighting for. But it doesn't mean I'll forget to torment, one more word to one of us and I'll seriously fuck up your head. I didn't want to be pathetic but you've pulled me straight down, we'll make you cry if you utter one more sound. |
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Sarah. Theres so much you don't understand about poetry. It's time you learned. I don';t care what you've been taught to right, theres no rules about poetry. Theres no boundaries. And how dare you judge somebody who's so much better then you?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by FeeFee (12-12-2004 - 08:11 PM)
by sarah10087 (12-12-2004 - 08:13 PM)
| " looks it's all about the flow "
wow, for a moment there i thought i was reading lyrics to a so solid crew song |
by woteva_girl0405 (12-12-2004 - 08:15 PM)
| cool. check out my poems. purposefully dropped is on there at the moment |
by Trapezium (12-12-2004 - 08:17 PM)
| You're so sad you listen to so solid crew. Your taste in poetic talent and music is obviously the same. It's no wonder as to why you feel the need to lie so much about the greats of ths site. |
by Genocide Reaper (12-12-2004 - 08:38 PM)
| I bet you listen to mr Trailer park trash hip hop star Slim dick shady to. Pathetic little child lmmfao |
by Genocide Reaper (12-12-2004 - 08:47 PM)
| *takes Morbids pride and places it in a bullet proof box, then places the box into a bunker thats nuke proof* O.o want to fuck with her pride Sarah? It'll be like running head first into a bullet. |
by Morbid Angel (12-12-2004 - 09:52 PM)
| I know it'll be safe with you. I fear not now I have my pride in the hands of someone so much stronger, yet gentle enough not to crush it in his touch. |
by sarah10087 (12-14-2004 - 09:59 AM)
| oh my god, i sed it sarcastically...i hate so solid crew, thats the point, its sounds like a shitty rhyme they'd come up with. Dont judge my music taste when you obv. have no knowledge on me or my tastes. I dont conform to what you may like but that doesnt mean im wrong. Oh yeah, morbids pride was lost along time ago, i think you'll find that box is empty |
by maledeth (12-14-2004 - 09:53 PM)
| Oh man..you three....Geno, Angel And Kahno fuck....Just..hilarious...Vanity with attitude! The three holy middlemen....I hail to a man with no face!!! Praise the faggots! |
by Morbid Angel (12-15-2004 - 09:53 PM)
| Shut the fuck up it's nothing to do with you. If anybody has anymore shit to say to me or anybody else involved then keep it to u2u's because I couldn't give a damn anymore. |
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