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Crying Out
written by darktinkerbell07:50 PM 11/21/04I hear you're cries
and I know it's too late
for me to help you....
you don't need my help
I hear your sobs, as they fade away
they're taking you farther away from me
and I let them, I can't do anything for you now
Just hold on to the necklace,
and the picture I gave you
and remember, I do love you
I hear your cries
you're screaming, "HELP ME ASHLEY, HELP ME"
but there's nothing I can do now
you made your decision,
let the consequences come
you are a part of me,
and your cries for help
tear my heart into pieces
but the only way your cries for help
can be answered, is
if you're away from me,
cause your far from my help.
you didn't cry for me when you
were cutting yourself,
or when you started taking drugs,
you need me less than you think,
you can do it on your own,
be strong,
you're crying out,
and I swear, you're cries for help
will be anwsered. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by silent_tears (11-21-2004 - 09:30 PM)
| reallllllllllly gud! i like it alot..keep writing more like this! |
by xXSaveMyEmptySoulXx (11-22-2004 - 12:58 PM)
| I agree. It was really good! You should write more! |
by (anonymous) (11-25-2004 - 02:22 AM)
| ur poem sucks n licks pussy lol it blew u blow n u will blow harder poetry is not 4 u b a comedian cuz u fuckin made me laugh i even pissed lick me bitch lol lol so yeah die lol love ya =) |
by darktinkerbell (11-27-2004 - 07:19 PM)
| thats why you gotta stay fuckin anonymous, you don't got the balls to let me know who the fuck you are |
by (anonymous) (11-27-2004 - 10:28 PM)
| AWESOME!!! thats the only way i can describe it, i can relate. you rock so much! keep it up! |
by (anonymous) (12-1-2004 - 10:01 PM)
| Its okay.. not the best.. but keep it up :) |
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