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Suicide Note
written by bleedblack01:18 AM 9/20/04Today is the day I decided
To turn my world around
I'll tell you why now
I'll write it all down
You might not get it
You might not understand
But I'll try my best
To help you comprehend
I felt so trapped
Lost and confused
I tried so hard
But my life was refused
I took a few pills that
Will never be traced
I took a few more
Till death I embrace
I slit my arms
Along the blue trails
This time I won’t make it
I know I won’t fail
Pools of red
Surround my remains
My broken neck
Circled by chains
I’m sorry for
The pain I’ve forced
I’m sorry I chose
This deadly course
It wasn’t your fault
I’m sorry I was a burden
I’m sorry I’ve draped you
With this black curtain
I didn’t mean for
This to affect you
I’m sorry I lied,
I was untrue
I didn’t want to put you
Through that pain
I had to let go
I went insane
Please don’t morn
Over something lost
I’m not worth the pain
I’m not worth the cost
I stayed here
As long as I could
I beat the odds
I never thought I would
I love you all and I wish there
Was a way I could stay
But there was no other way out
I couldn’t live another day |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by smile_inc (9-20-2004 - 01:21 AM)
| Very interesting poem. Is this how you are feeling right now? If you want to talk, I'm always here. I liked the feeling that erupted from this poem :) Nice work! |
by sonumbed (9-20-2004 - 03:09 PM)
| that was beautiful...very detailed |
by freakroses (9-24-2004 - 07:20 PM)
| oh my god that is so beautifull
like my firt suiside note except mine wasent so well constructed and didnt rhighm how ever the fuck you spell that word any way its an amazing poem |
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